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I first saw you on a hot summer day in the park. So, I went over to to you, and asked you if you wanted to play. And, so, we became best friends, and now, we're all grown up. So, we went on a date to your favorite restaurant. And, I asked if you wanted to have lunch here tomorrow, and you said, "Yes, be here at 12:00.". So, I waited for you, but then you came and said that there's someone else. And, so, you walked away.
Then, on a rainy day, I in my sweater with my hands in my pockets, and my hood on my head, walking down the sidewalk...and you were standing there with your boyfriend. Then, I ran into you. Then, I waved. Then, I walked on, but you ran and said that you loved me. And, so, we lived happily ever after.
Happily ever after.
-composed by Jake W. Grebe II, age 8 June 10th, 2009
I first saw you on a hot summer day in the park. So, I went over to to you, and asked you if you wanted to play. And, so, we became best friends, and now, we're all grown up. So, we went on a date to your favorite restaurant. And, I asked if you wanted to have lunch here tomorrow, and you said, "Yes, be here at 12:00.". So, I waited for you, but then you came and said that there's someone else. And, so, you walked away.
Then, on a rainy day, I in my sweater with my hands in my pockets, and my hood on my head, walking down the sidewalk...and you were standing there with your boyfriend. Then, I ran into you. Then, I waved. Then, I walked on, but you ran and said that you loved me. And, so, we lived happily ever after.
Happily ever after.
-composed by Jake W. Grebe II, age 8 June 10th, 2009
Wowza...imagination!
WOW, your son is a better writer than I am! That was so beautiful!
ReplyDeleteLove, Andria